Tuesday, November 23, 2004

FIRST READ

I finally got through my screenplay. I dunno. I dunno. It feels a bit slow. It feels a bit low stakes, even though the stakes are pretty high. The action feels a little forced -- it's so important for a fantasy film, or a filmed fairy story, to feel completely credible, and I'm not sure it is.

Of course I am the least objective of readers.

What it does seem to do is convincingly create a world we haven't seen before. That's worth quite a bit.

I wonder if the backdoor-pilot-iness of it comes through? Hope not.

Well, it always takes a few passes through a screenplay before I can really get into it and start fixing things. I'll make my minor changes pass, and that'll be a way into feeling the structure.

I do sort of feel like this is not necessarily the very best story I could be telling to interest the audience in my world. But that ship has sailed for the moment -- maybe it will come to me how to fix it without having to throw everything out. Before I throw everything out I should at least try to make it work.

5:11 PM

1 Comments:

When I feel like that after having written something, it's usually because my main character is not active enough in the script. I usually have to go back and make things harder for him, create more conflict between the characters.

By  Anonymous, at 5:26 PM  

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