Thanks again to Lee Goldberg
, for the heads-up on a most excellent blog. Query Letters
is where an Unnamed Hollywood Exec posts the most execrable query letters he gets.
Before sending off your query letters, probably a good idea to read some of these first just to see what other people's terrible query letters are like. In particular if any of them seem better than yours, you may need to rewrite. Your query letter, at least, and possibly your script.
(I'm a devout believer that if your query letter sounds more fun than your script, you've just handed yourself a small, powerful rewrite note. Rewrite your script according to your new, improved query letter!)