Sunday, November 20, 2005

SYNOPSES

There are bad lengths for screen stories and good ones. I find I can't get a five page story without first writing a ten page beat sheet and boiling it down. A page and a half is easy. Three pages (750) words is even harder than 5 pages. I have to throw out actual story and replace it with something simpler.

When I write a synopsis, my goal is to tell a story. Not necessarily the same story as in the movie. It's more the story that the movie would be if it were that length of story. I take out stuff that's too complicated for the length. Sometimes I replace it with simpler stuff that's not in the movie. If they can't be bothered to read the screenplay...

I find the best way to write a synopsis is to reread the screenplay once and then retell the story off the top of my head. I try not to refer to the screenplay unless I'm stuck and can't remember. (That's a warning sign that the story may not be flowing properly, by the way.)

A synopsis that's a precise reconstruction of the screenplay story is almost always dull to read. Don't write a real synopsis. Tell the story.

2 comments:

Melanie said...

The synopsis is definitely harder to write than the script, no matter what the length. I think of the synopsis as "the story of the story," which helps me let go of my dependence on the details.

Stephen Gallagher said...

What's really hard to get over to a lot of people, some of whom ought to know better, is just how thoroughly imagined a story has to be before you can synopsise it.

They want the idea in all its essentials in a couple of pages because that's easiest for them to engage with and work from... for me a synopsis or an outline or a treatment is something I arrive at after a helluva lot of trying-out of different ideas. Yet they act as if two pages of story equals two pages of effort, all first-thoughts and no big thing.